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Do you know what it is?
Do you know what holds you down?
Do you know the pain that feeds it?
This thing holding you to the ground?

These walls that bind you
These chains that hold you
This blackness that imprisons you
This is the darkness keeps you

No way to move forward
No way to cry for help
No way to catch my breath
No way to see ahead

These walls won't open
These chains won't break
This blackness won't disappear
This is the darkness then won't let go

Do you know what it is?
What holds you down?
Do you know the pain that feeds it?
This thing holding you to the ground?
I don't know why i made this one, but hey, i think i did pretty damn good on it. (HEY! I DID AWESOME ON MY POETRY TEST!!! WHO'DDA THOUGH?!)

Lost and Key to My Heart are definitely(don't friggin' care how its spelled) my favorites, out of my poems. Jayfeather poem would have to be my third Fav.

I hope you like it, even tho its so short! :P Short poems are wonderful...then you don't gotta go through it all lol
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tessarosa Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
no wonder you did good on your test your amazing!
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Spotted73 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011   Artist
thanks :D
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RikoxBlackstar Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It is betrayal and words that will bind you.
I think this is really good! ^^ it suit my mood right now, I am feeling very depressed.
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Spotted73 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011   Artist
I KNOEZ! :D thank you. Tell me what sorta mood u got and i'll write a poem for u, amigo
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RikoxBlackstar Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yay~ right now, exauhsted. I MADE IT TO FINALS IN AIRBAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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AmberRoseWrighter Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
wow, that was amazing! and congrats on ur test
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Spotted73 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011   Artist
thank you. i tried really hard
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AmberRoseWrighter Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
:D
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GhostTheRider Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
wow. this was more than great!
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Spotted73 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011   Artist
thank you. lol its not very bright, is it?
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